This is a scene on my biking trail and I really enjoyed this particular spot. Perhaps because I spotted deers grazing here before. But doesn't matter how many times I have tried imagining my final painting will be, I still struggle with feel of it. Should I omit the majority grass in the middle ground? Okay, I admit this might be needed value study. Any suggestions is welcome. I uploaded the steps of my painting.

Original photo

Initial wash

Second upper half

Second lower half

Which I think the fore ground is too much, so I sprayed water on it

And adding more details when it dries

And the end I am all lost... Well, I guess I should celebrate the attempt. :-)

Okay, this is my second attempt. Not sure if it is an improvement though. Do provide feedback if you have time. Thank you in advance!