Hi Seija! So nice to see your work here. I love these posts, since they trigger a discussion, which for me is the main reason to visit the forum. Reading Edo's and other's comments gives new insights and makes me think more in my own work. And since there is no right or wrong, all comments are valuable. I don't mind so much the composition as the somewhat flat values in your painting. Could there be more contrasts with light and shadow? Maybe Edo's suggestion to ground the "cow eggs" is one way to do it? I don't know...

I use a lot of Fabriano paper and I both love and hate the rough version with its strange surface pattern. But it all depends on what you paint on it of course.