Hi Shirley,I would have personally preferred a slightly more industrial look for those buildings. Of course, you’ve made it much friendlier — and it turned out to be a lovely watercolour. Still, try to make sure the roof angles are correct; that really helps to strengthen the structure of the painting.
I actually have an excellent article by my friend Kees van Aalst that talks about moving or adjusting elements in a scene to create a better composition. It’s a great read, and it perfectly illustrates how small changes can make a big difference.
The roofs, in particular, are wonderful opportunities to bring in both light and structure. I’ve made a quick sketch to show what I mean — it might help you see how those angles can add strength and rhythm to the design.
Hi Shirley,I would have personally preferred a slightly more industrial look for those buildings. Of course, you’ve made it much friendlier — and it turned out to be a lovely watercolour. Still, try to make sure the roof angles are correct; that really helps to strengthen the structure of the painting.
I actually have an excellent article by my friend Kees van Aalst that talks about moving or adjusting elements in a scene to create a better composition. It’s a great read, and it perfectly illustrates how small changes can make a big difference.
The roofs, in particular, are wonderful opportunities to bring in both light and structure. I’ve made a quick sketch to show what I mean — it might help you see how those angles can add strength and rhythm to the design.
https://www.keesvanaalst.nl/wordpress/i-can-do-that-too/