Corrections made according to Olivers and Edos advice.
I attempted the correctional advice given earlier by adding a couple of rocks to the first painting. And then painted another where I tried to darken the water on the right edge and the bottom. The camera is enhancing the blue colours. So it is not true to colour. -Still a bit weak perhaps. But I see the difference and importance of these changes. I like the one with new rocks best..


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It's nice.
I like the tree line in the previous one, the rocks colours have more variations in the second one and I like them. Perhaps, to enhance the feeling of depth, the distant rocks could be smaller and the foreground ones more stronger values. I like more the distant hills in the second one, as well.