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Sunset in Bamburi Mombasa


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Grainne
Grainne
Feb 06, 2023

Hello! There are many things to enjoy in your painting. I particularly like the way you have handled the shore in the foreground, the tree on the right and the sky. I like the way everything seems to sparkle in the evening light.


If I could make one suggestion...you might want to think about toning down the very dark windows on those buildings way back in the distance. Firstly, I don't think they would appear that dark at that distance, but more importantly, anything of such high contrast almost immediately draws the eye to it. In this instance the eye is drawn back there rather too quickly and one skips over all the lovely things happening in the rest of the painting. It's only thought. What do you think? 😊

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